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If you are like me you have spent endless hours writing the perfect picture book manuscript. You have had your story critiqued and professionally edited. Now you are ready to take the next big step—finding a literary agent— by writing a query letter that gets attention.
But what exactly does that mean?
Think of your query letter for a picture book as your story’s elevator pitch. It’s your one shot to grab an agent’s attention and convince them to read more. You just need to be clear, professional, and authentic. Sounds easy right?
What Is a Query Letter (And Why It Matters)
A query letter is a short, professional letter you send to literary agents to pitch your picture book manuscript. It’s your first introduction—your handshake, your smile, your elevator pitch—all in about 300 words.
What to Include in Your Picture Book Query Letter
Here’s a simple structure for writing a compelling query letter for a children’s picture book:
It all begins with a personalized greeting. Start with the agent’s name—never “Dear Agent” or “To Whom It May Concern.” Use your research skills to find the correct name and spelling. If you’ve met them at a conference or follow their blog, mention it (briefly). Example:
Dear Ms. Sanders,
I enjoyed your recent interview on the “KidLit and More” podcast and loved your insight on humor in picture books.
Hook and Book Pitch (The “Elevator” Part)
Your second paragraph is the most important. Introduce your picture book with a brief pitch. The who, what, where and when of your book. The pitch is a taste of your story that leaves the reader wanting more and demonstrates your writing style and approach. Focus on:
- Your MC and their goal
- The main conflict
- What makes your story unique
Brief Bio and Writing Credentials
Now, tell the agent a little about yourself. You don’t need a long list of awards—just enough to show you’re serious about writing for children. Include:
- Relevant publishing credits
- Memberships (like SCBWI)
- A personal touch that shows your connection to children’s literature
Example:
I’m a member of SCBWI and a kindergarten teacher by day, storyteller by night. I’ve published short stories in Highlights High Five and love writing stories that inspire curiosity and giggles in young readers.
Closing (And a Thank You!)
Wrap up with a simple, polite closing. Mention if your manuscript is available upon request, and always thank the agent for their time.
Example:
Thank you for considering Marvin the Moon-Eating Mouse. I’ve attached the manuscript per your submission guidelines and would be happy to send more stories upon request.
Warm regards,
[Your Name]
[Email Address]
[Website or Portfolio Link, if you have one]
Final Thoughts
Final tips
- Keep it short and sweet. Picture book queries should rarely go over one page.
- Follow submission guidelines. Every agent is different—some want attachments, others prefer pasting into the body of the email.
- Avoid synopsis overload. Unlike novel queries, you don’t need to summarize every beat of the story.
- Show your voice. Let a hint of your picture book’s tone shine through in your query.
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